D IV Teknik Infrastruktur Sipil dan Perancangan Arsitektur 19
Universitas Diponegoro
Scar On My Head
Universitas Diponegoro
Student :
1. Fajar Kurniawan (40030519650015)
2. Alif Nur Rizqi (40030519650103)
3. Yitzak Kamya L. (40030519650125)
Lecturer : Anjar Setiawan, S.Pd., M.Pd
by Fajar Kurniawan
(015)
When I was 5 years old,
something happened with my head. The incident happened in afternoon before I
went to mosque. I was a santri and I had to go there hurriedly. My mother told
me that the incident began when I went to bathroom. First, I was woken up by my
mother when ashar adzan was beginning. I just slept in a moment so I shocked
and I afraid if I late to go. I didn’t know why I had to run to the bathroom.
The bathroom floor was slick and I lost my balance, so I fell and my head hit a
sharp side of the floor. I cried and my mother brought me to the nearest clinic
in my region. She scolded me and advised me that I must more be careful in all
times. My head was given a bandage by doctor, and he gave me some medicines.
After that, my friend visited me with their mother to check my conditions. It
is my unforgettable thing and I will make it a valuable experience in my life.
Fell From Bicycle
by Alif Nur Rizqi (103)
When I was 7 years old, I have a
unforgettable experience. It was a very sunny day. My father taught me to ride
bicycle around the village. He was very patient to give me directions. I was
very happy when I realized my ability to ride the bicycle. One day, I tried to
ride my bicycle alone. Something happened here. I passed a slippery road. I
became nervous and finally I fell into gutter and my head hit the stone there.
After that, I told my father about the accident. I imagined my father would be
angry and never let me to ride bicycle again. But, he just laughed and advised
me that I must be careful. Finally, I can ride the bicycle and I got he’s
permission to ride it everywhere. I can not forget this experience.
Fell From Motorcycle
by
Yitzak Kamya Leiwakabessy (125)
When
I was in senior high school, I have bad experience about riding a motorcycle.
Someday, I went to my friend’s house, his name is Audi. I went to his house in
evening with my motorcycle. We watched movie, played games together and cooked
BBQ. It was so fun and became our favorite things to do. We spent our time and we
was enjoying it until midnight. After that, I had to go back to my home. I rode
my motorcycle, and left his house. When I rode my motorcycle to back home, and
then I through street food corner was very crowded. I lost my focus because of the
crowded. Then I continued riding, and I didn’t see gravel on the road. Immediately
I pull my brake handle, then my motorcycle was slip and I crash not far from
the street food corner. The crowded immediately saw at me, then I wake up and I
checked my body and also my motorcycle. Then, I got my motorcycle and rode
it again to back home.
From :
BalasHapusKiki Nurhayati
Nanda Maulida putri
D3 administrasi pajak
Judul cerita : Fell from motorcycle
Ada beberapa kesalahan seperti :
1. Tobe pada kalimat tersebut seharusnya "we were enjoying it.." bukan "we was"
2. Kurang menarik karena tidak ada klimaks cerita
3. Seharusnya lebih menekankan pada peristiwa jatuhnya serta keadaan setelah peristiwa tersebut.
Tetep semangat:)
Thanks untuk koreksinya kaa.. xoxo
Hapus